One day a little girl got some pink ballet shoes , but she wanted some blue ones. So, she stealthily snuck out to the shed. She climbed over a rusty chair, a treehouse that was never built and a rat. Then she hid the shoes behind her granny’s ashes!
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nice adjectives like pink and blue
Your story made me laugh out loud! Granny’s ashes in the shed!!
Keep up the good writing but remember that the challenge is to write 100 words.
Tyler – this is a fabulous piece of writing that really made me smile! I read it on my birthday so it was a nice present. such a shame you didn’t use all 100 words!
Mrs Skinner (Team100)
Short and simple but yet intriguing, great job!