It is night …
The radiant lights glint on the damp road,
Broken ladders lie on the smooth floor,
The rain drumming on the sleek floor creating a beat beat, beat, beat,
Cats’ eyes are glowing, gleaming and following people,
Whoever walks there walks alone,
The crow black ceiling of the world is starless and moonless, dark and cold,
Shadows are lingering behind you like lost souls on earth cursed to live on Earth for ages long,
Traffic islands floating in between the pavements like float in the cyan, green, deep, blue, sea,
Trees being painted sodium orange by florescent lights.
brilliant piece of writing
Well done Olivia I really enjoyed this! Shanelle.
I like the way you’ve set it out so it’s easier to read Olivia, and I like the lovely descriptive language!
this has so much affect on the reader, it really describes a dark night..when your alone 🙂